I will introduce myself.
HELLO!
My name is Nina(양명은) and my birth day is 2000.09.05.
My hobby is to drawing things and dancing like an octopus.
I like to draw strange cartoons.
My favorite cartoonist is 조석. He is really handsome and humorous.
He looks like this:
He draws cartoons named 마음의소리,N의등대,조의영역.
I see all of his webtoons because they are really fun and thrilling.
I want to draw pictures as well as him and humorous like him.
And my favorite singer is 버스커버스커.
I really like their voice. It kind of sounds like a grandfather, but I like their voice.
My favorite food? There are too many but I will just write about two things.
I really like chicken and pork stew .
Chicken is my dearest and pork stew is my No.1
I like them because they are so delicious and healthy.They are creamy and their personallities(?) are really good.
Are you saying that they don't have life? It's because you're insensitive.
I can hear their voices saying "please eat me~ please eat me~"
You can't hear them? You can't hear them? If you can't, just give up
Because this ability is just given to special people.(?)
Well, I think the story is straying off the topic.
Whatever. I finished my introduction!!! Hurray!!!!!!!!
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Wow! You have talent for being a cartoon artist. Your introduction is funny and well written. You just need to put these sentences into a paragraph, please.
I also really like comic books. I read several of them every month. If you write your own, will you show it to me? Or am I not a special person? Whatever. Nice to meet you!^^
Hello NINA!
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